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Writing Specifically for Standardized Tests

 

 

 

Parent Helper

Using the California Content Standards Everyday

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Office of Curriculum and Instruction

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The Importance of Parent Involvement

What you say matters!

 

o     Parents what you say to your child matters.

o     90% of all learning takes place at home

o     Comments such as: “I was never good at math (spelling, reading…etc.)” should be avoided.

                     Statements like this gives your child permission to fail.

o     Positive reinforcement:

o       We can work on this for five minutes everyday 

o       We can learn it together

o       We can make it fun and simple

 

 

 


          How to Study and Get Results

 

o     Environment that allows the student to focus

o       This is individual to each student

o     Study should be in regular, doable intervals

o       Model: Half hour of work – ten minute break

o       Frustration yields no results!

§      Avoid emotional conflict – Step away from the work!

·        Take a walk

·        Have a snack

·        Get out and get moving

§      Then come back and try a different approach

o     Learning is active!

o       Reading – out loud

o       Math – work it out on paper and verbally

 

 

Sample Study Schedule

Snack

After School Activity

10 to 30 Minutes of Math

Take a Break

Finish out remaining work

Take a Break

10 to 30 Minutes of Reading

 

*Incorporate Handbook Activities throughout the day

 

 

 

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The Helping Hand Paragraph

A Template for Grades K-3

 

 

 

Helping Hand Paragraph

 

  1. Finger one:  I am the main sentence.  I am the come and see what I wrote sentence!
  1. I support finger one AND I’m the idea for the first sentence in the second paragraph
  2. I’m detail about sentence one AND I’m the idea for the first sentence of the third paragraph.
  3. I’m the circling in of the last bit of detail!
  4. Thumbs up for a squasher final sentence!  I sum up the paragraph.

 


My Paragraph

 

by    ______________________________

 

 

Pointer:

 

 

 

 

 


Finger 2:

 

 

 

 

 


Finger 3:

 

 

 

 

 


Pinkie:

 

 

 

 

 


Squasher:

 

 

 

 

 



The Persuasive Essay

 

In persuasive writing, students construct an argument and present evidence.

Basically, they take a po

sition and argue a point.

They are experts at this!   Think about it.  They do it every day...with you, their teachers, their coaches…tons of people.  They successfully pose arguments and WIN arguments every day.

This is their type of assignment.

 

Every Persuasive Essay written should contain...

·         a clear position...or claim

·         a convincing argument

·         solid evidence to support your claim

·         a reasonable tone

·         an approach that puts personal feelings aside

·          

These kinds of evidence will be useful:

Facts:    Statements that are generally accepted as true.

Statistics:     Data gathered from credible sources.

Authorities:    Statements that are supported by citing an authority.  When one quotes a respected authority an argument gains more weight.

Anecdotes:    Short stories that tell about actual happenings can effectively provide evidence to an argument.

Scenarios:    Scenarios answer the question: What if?  Scenarios can make arguments more vivid and convincing.

A great essay goes farther by anticipating counterarguments (arguments that go against or represent the other side of your argument) and either refute or, at least, make concessions for them.


Great Essays Ask:

·         What will the reader be thinking?

·         What will the reader be feeling?

·         How will the reader react?

·         What objections or challenges can there be to my argument?

Put yourself in the same frame of mind you put yourself in when you ask your parents, guardians, or teachers for permission to do something:

·         What do I want?

·         What evidence do I have to convince them I should get what I want?

·         What could they argue against me?

·         What will I use to counter their argument?

·         What facts support my argument?

·         Don't forget your authorities -- Brittany's mom said she could go.  But Mitchell has one. :)

Most importantly, make sure they know the subject they are arguing well!

Take a stand without becoming emotional!

Finally…tell them to enjoy...after all,

we all know they love winning a good argument!

 

Most students have trouble getting started.  Following are templates for students to use.  They “fill in the blanks” with their own words…until they are ready to dump the templates and move out on their own.

 

They are a great tool to get students started as they never have to stare at a blank page!


Writing Persuasive Essays

What is the Link to the California English/Language Standards?

 

 

Grade 4:  Persuasive

(150-200 Words)

 

Grade 5: Persuasive

(500-700 Words)

a.  State a clear position in support of a proposal.

b.  Support a position with relevant evidence.

c.  Address reader concerns.

a.  State a clear position in support of a proposal.

b.  Support a position with relevant evidence.

c.  Follow an organization pattern.

d.  Address reader concerns.

 

 

 

Grade 6:  Persuasive

(150-200 Words)

 

Grade 8: Persuasive

(500-700 Words)

a.  State a clear position or perspective in support of proposition or proposal.

b.  Describe the points in support of the proposition, employing well-articulated evidence.

c.  Anticipate and address reader concerns and counterarguments.

a.  Include a well-defined thesis.

b.  Present detailed evidence, examples, and reasoning to support arguments, differentiating between facts and opinion.

c.  Provide details, reasons, and examples, arranging them effectively by anticipating and answering reader concerns and counterarguments.

 

 


Persuasive Essay Template

 

Paragraph 1

Type of Sentence

Your Sentence

 

 

1.  Attention Grabber:

 

 

2.  Your Position

 

 

List the reasons why you feel your position on this argument is a good position.  Why is your argument better than any other.

3.  Reason 1:

 

 

4.  Reason 2:

 

 

5.  Reason 3

 

 

6.  Concluding Sentence

 

Tie it all together

 

 

 

 

Paragraph 2 -- Support for Reason 1

Words in Red are "transition words" and may be substituted

Type of Sentence

Your Sentence

 

 

1. Restate Reason 1

 

 

2.  Support Reason 1

For example,

 

3.  Support

Furthermore,

 

4.  Support

Additionally,

 

5.  Concluding Sentence

 

Tie this paragraph all together

 

 


Persuasive Essay Template – Page 2

 

 

 

Paragraph 3 -- Support for Reason 2

Words in Red are "transition words" and may be substituted

Type of Sentence

Your Sentence

 

 

1. Restate Reason 2

 

 

2.  Support Reason 2

For example,

 

3.  Support

Furthermore,

 

4.  Support

Additionally,

 

5.  Concluding Sentence

 

Tie this paragraph all together

 

 

 

 

Paragraph 4 -- Support for Reason 3

Words in Red are "transition words" and may be substituted

Type of Sentence

Your Sentence

 

 

1. Restate Reason 3

 

 

2.  Support Reason 3

For example,

 

3.  Support

Furthermore,

 

4.  Support

Additionally,

 

5.  Concluding Sentence

 

Tie this paragraph all together

 

 

 

 

 

PERSUASIVE ESSAY TEMPLATE – Page 3

 

Paragraph 5 -- Argument the OPPOSITE point of view

Words in Red are "transition words" and may be substituted

Type of Sentence

Your Sentence

 

 

1. Counterargument (CA)

However,